- Title: She Found Them
- Author: Dab10
- ISBN: 9781301913916
- Page: 269
- Format: ebook
this is a lunch time reader quick sample Oh, my god she found them I will never hear the end of it what if she wants a divorce The shame The ridicule What if she tells mom She emailed me Dear tom, I found some interesting files on your computer today We will talk when you get home Donna.
Recent Comments "She Found Them"
Bwahahaha! This was a funny little read She found them on his computer while he was at work Thinking she was going to freak out all over him when he got home for what she found this was a fun little read and had a great surprise ending after the build up!
This short story was not what I expectedbut I was very pleasantly surprised with this story!! It was HOT and a little naughty ;-) I look forward to reading more from this author!!! If you are looking for a very quick read that will set the mood for some funis is it!!!
★She Found Them by Dab10This is a R2R that was given to me in exchange for my honest review. WTF is about all that comes to mind. There's not much to say about this book, as its only 6 pages long. I was interested to learn what she found, but his manic behavior about sent me into a panic attack. Although I was surprised by what she discovered. Not to mention, there is no way in hell, a female would make that comment. This story needs serious editing. You know it is going to be bad, when the li [...]
"She Found Them" by Dab10 is a very quick short that follows a business man in a meeting worried about the fact that his wife 'found them'. We don't know what she found, we can only assume but his fear and anxiety we feel first hand, such is the skill of the author to get us into the mind of the narrator.Short and poignant this comes quickly to its end. Very enjoyable.
got to say this one surprised me in the end and I felt his worry the whole way thru
He does need an editorIt's a good concept, and I encourage the writer to keep writing. However, it is poorly written. The flow is off, and basic grammar is the least of the issues.
a great quick suspense story.
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